Wow and wow. Great script with vivid three-dimensional characters. From the first couple pages I was drawn in and couldn't put it down. This is the type of story-telling that is lacking in most movies nowadays. I look forward to seeing this film.Joel (7 out of 10 )
So sad, yet so courageous.Chris L (10 out of 10 )
One of the most impressive scripts I've ever read. Cipriano is a talent that can not be overlooked. The final film is easily the best independent film to come out in years.jimjones (2 out of 10 )
I'm afraid the dialogue and actions did not match up with the characters very well. IE no 12 year old kid is going to use words like "incarcerated."
Characters not developed very well.