A really fun read. This is the way to write action! Only negative would be there was too much cursing in the narrative description. Still, a good script!Brittany (1 out of 10 )
The writer doesn't even take the time to write through instead of thru and with instead of w/. I wasn't expecting much from this one, but come on. Lazy and self-indulgent writing.
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