Karen got a twisted mind! This is completely different than what i can see on screen; the same movie? Not at all. I think you got to read the screenplay/original script to understand that movie. I can't say THIS is better but it's really great to read another "story" of G.S when you keep in mind that this is the original story.
7/10 cause I'm a bit disapointed that there's no screenplay yet but the story Karen wrote is pretty awesome.