Max (3 out of 10 ) I havn't seen the actual movie. But the script's sort of boring. You don't find yourself getting engaged with the main character.
The whole thing with showing his brain gets pretty confusing. The script might have a better, more typical, story without all that. But the point of a story like this isnt to follow the normal formula.
Tom Brady (2 out of 10 ) Boring! It wasn't intense enough.
Sean (1 out of 10 ) You can say that again. I have just finished reading this screenplay, it was rubbish. If you realy want to read it, it contains one use of language, nudity and mild violence. The SOLARISE screenplay was better than this, and that was lame.
shawn (1 out of 10 ) The rating is because there's no zero. What is this? I know I might be learning screenwriting but..
Tanh (1 out of 10 ) Really? This story seems like a series of unrelated incidents. I can't empathize with the protagonist, what's he trying to do? Ok so if plot A is his love story? Then of what significant are the supporting characters? Is there another subplot they're supposed to realize? There's too much fluff with too little content. Back to the drawing board with is one, I'd say.