anya (10 out of 10 ) I think this script is really god! They should have left it how it was, no editing whatsoever.
Buddha Scribe (9 out of 10 ) Very nice script. Somehow I got through the whole thing not really knowing who Les is but I guess that's ok. I cared about the characters and the ending of the script invoked some emotions in me. Reading something has never forced that to happen to me before. I'm definitely going to watch the movie now. I hope it's just as good as the script.
S Victor (6 out of 10 ) 4th draft as a shooting draft is not bad. But there are still major errors in character introductions and incident clarifications. By itself the script is not bad. But as a film, it is mediocre. Script flaws makes bad directing and bad acting. It is obvious that authors didn't dramatize or act it out. The bad acting from Pierce Brosnan is due to the script. Well, who can write a good one for Mr. Former James Bond?
S Victor (6 out of 10 ) For instance, even in the first 5 pages of the script, and the opening 7:30 minute mark there is this big character intro problem. Tyler is supposed to be sleeping with a blonde girl, and to be a heavy-smoker. How could the little Caroline know that his brother is smoking, when he never smoked once in the film?